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The Corruption Chapter 6
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BRRRRIIIINNNNGGGG!!!

Agh, my phone. Jeez. I quickly scrambled to retrieve it from where it had slid deep into my pocket and checked the caller ID. "Hey, whaddya know, it's P_E. I haven't chatted with him in ages..."
I hurriedly answer the phone, listening for P_E's familiar voice. The accustomed tone was replaced with panic; old P_E was definitely troubled about something. "Hey LW, I wish we could talk, but there's something wrong over here at the cafe - remember the old Percy Jackson novels and fantasy stuff like that? Well if I didn't see it for myself I wouldn't believe ---"
"Hold it," I interrupt him. "What exactly happened?"
The voice on the other end was shaky. "Um... LW, I don't know how to tell you this, but a rift has opened up and MM, L_L, and CJ were just sucked up inside. BB2.1 just came over a few minutes ago - maybe he could explain it better? I mean, he's the science guy."
"All right, let me speak with 'im."
BB2.1 expounded on all that P_E had said, clearing up what I needed to know. "Okay, I'm headin' up to my lab," I told him. "I'm worried, too. Hey BB, could you spare the time to come over? I might need some help."
"Sure, my friend. I'll do just that."
BB2.1 was about 30 minutes away, so I decided to get an early start on the rift problem. I rushed upstairs to my lab and checked to see if my radio beacons were still working. Good. You see, I'm pretty much the tech guy in the MB group - I can fix almost anything. A regular MacGyver, I guess, and if you're wondering, I absolutely love that show, my dudes. I have monitors to track all my buds, and the signals are indestructible and unblocked. Nothing can damage or alter them, so I can always find my friends if I need them...

Like now.

I glanced at my phone. 'I'm almost there', BB2.1 texted me, 'What have you got so far?'
'Not much, I'm just checking the trackers', I answered.
I turned in the direction of my display on the wall, depressing a glowing blue button embedded in the bottom. "TRACKING COMPLETE," a digital voice acknowledged. "Nice," I said. All three of the disappearing individuals were showing up. I examined them, just to make sure they were all moving. "Oof," I muttered. "I wonder why they're not mobile. Maybe they're all unconscious? I hope nothing bad's happened to them."
Suddenly, CJ's identifying red dot faltered. The small light blinked on and off, then as quickly as it had shut off, it came back on. "Whew."

Then the worst happened.

CJ's light blinked off completely.

I felt like the air had been sucked out of my lungs as I realized what had happened. My trackers sense life force, and if an individual dies, the light will stop working - that means he had lost his tracker or...

I didn't want to think about it.

'BB, we got a problem. CJ may be dead.'

Hey, my dudes, so... how did I do? I hope I did the Corruption justice, as it's an awesome story which I think needs to be executed perfectly - so I am giving the role of the next chapter to Rubrickscube. I can't wait to see what he creates! winking face
EDIT: Credit to CJ (TheSpyderBrick) for making the awesome custom face smiling face with open mouth and smiling eyes

Hope you like it!

Signing off,

~LW
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MOCmaster
4 months ago
Awesome!
You're really good at storytelling!
I like how you're going with this!
MOCmaster
4 months ago
Sure thing bro!
Anytime!
TG
4 months ago
Noice.

Can I make the next one?
LegoWilderness
4 months ago
Sure, if RBC wants ya too! If he and MrBrick turn it down (they were the ones I picked originally), I'll let you know, okay?
LegoWilderness
4 months ago
(If RBC turned it down, MrBrick would do it)
TG
4 months ago
K.
TheNinjaBrick
4 months ago
This story is cool right now and who’s doing chapter 7
TG
4 months ago
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MrBrick
4 months ago
Wow! Really good writing!
TheSpyderBrick
4 months ago
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOH MY GOD



This is amazing :0
Incredible job on the story! I'm glad I chose you to do this!
LegoWilderness
4 months ago
@MrBrick

Thanks dude!


@CJ

Thanks bud! Appreciate it!
LegoWilderness
4 months ago
I forgot to credit you for the face... I'm sorry I'll do that rn.
Phantom_Extremis
4 months ago
RBC isn’t doing it, he didn’t even make a fig? Maybe he is but, I dunno, Awesome story, I love the way you included me....(Maybe I should read Percy Jackson...)
LegoWilderness
4 months ago
Thanks man! Oh, I PM'd him before... I hope he can.
Hey, the Percy Jackson series is awesome, but you should definitely read the Seven Wonders by Peter Lerangis if you like rifts.
MrBrick
4 months ago
No, P_E made 4. I totally forget who made 3. TheSpyderBrick made 1 and 5, MOCmaster made 2. Now I'm gonna have to find it.
BrickBot2.1
4 months ago
Wow...
That is amazing! You have great writing skills, I can tell you that.

I love what you did with the story, and the suspense!
LegoWilderness
4 months ago
Thank you so much, BB!

I tried to do my best with the plot; I hope it works itself out!
MeinGasBillistTooHigh
4 months ago
"I have monitors to track all my buds, and the signals are indestructible and unblocked. Nothing can damage or alter them, so I can always find my friends if I need them..."

What a creep XD
MeinGasBillistTooHigh
4 months ago
Interesting concept though, of watching over everyone and having a light to represent everyone's status. I might use that for you if I ever feature you in something of mine
LegoWilderness
4 months ago
XD
Just a loyal friend, right?

Thanks! That would be awesome
JmanBricks
4 months ago
Amazing job, I really like the way you told the story!
MrBrick
4 months ago
Does RBC even know he's doing the next chapter?
LegoWilderness
4 months ago
@Jman

Thanks bro!

@Yep, he's working on it right now.
TheNinjaBrick
4 months ago
When is chapter 7 coming out it has been 2 weeks and still no chapter 7 come on!
LegoWilderness
4 months ago
Woah chill bud. MrBrick is doing it now as RBC couldn't.
SnapStudio
2 months ago
Is that the top of the bookshop?
LegoWilderness
2 months ago
Yes, it is. I thought I should definitely use the top, as the rest of the bookshop became too much in the editor to actually see the centerpiece of the model
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